Monday, November 17, 2014

For Review: A College Paper from the Past




This was a paper I wrote in November of 2005.  I decided to pick this as my writing sample to have reviewed.  (More to come about this soon).  Please read.

Professor Middleton
Psychobiographies: English 466
14 November 2005
An Auto-Psychobiographical look at Psychotherapy Gone Bad
If a wealthy person were never poor, would they truly be appreciating their economical status?  Does a prostitute in Burma, who never had the opportunity or access to resources, appreciate the negation of their current condition?  Would a person that has not tasted a strawberry be able to say they appreciate or not appreciate the fruit?  Human existence is filled with questions.  More importantly the ability to question is indicative of humanity.  In times of adversity the negation of it, usually a situation of better qualitative value is desired; yet, those moments of happiness are few and far between and never last for long.    While the inevitability of human existence are disheartening Girl, Interrupted brings forth the importance of adversity as a necessary condition for embracing humanity’s ability of hope and transformation through an auto-psycho-biographical self-analysis of an intelligent author attempting to understand and cope with the adversities of inadequate therapy.  
 Individuals within humanity are subjected to psychiatric diagnosis.  The medical community is not always correct.  “Like Prozac Nation, this memoir [Girl, Interrupted] points toward a critique of ‘bad’ psychotherapy and of the institutions that control the decisions regarding mental health” (Marlan 4).  The medical community’s methods for treating patients are not always effective either.  The patient suffers the most.  Adversities of life are a necessary condition for being a human.  In One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest, a patient named McMurphey goes through a similar ordeal like Susanna Kaysen; however, McMurphey is not voluntarily institutionalized like Kaysen.  Nevertheless both characters have to deal with the medical community as an institution.  While institutionalized a patient gives away a part of their freedom and must submit to the power dynamics of the institution.   
Like Girl, Interrupted, One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest parallels how the human condition of hope is still alive even under extreme conditions of oppression.  “They (the Combine) don’t bust you that way;” says McMurphey in One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest to Chief, “They put things in!  They install things.  They start as quick as they see you’re gonna be big and go to working and stalling their filthy machinery when you’re little, and keep on and on till you’re fixed! ” (Kesey 189). This is to say that the Combine, metaphorical for groups with overwhelming power relations and influence, is the evil culprit.  There is, in McMurphey’s eyes, hope that the control being harnessed onto them is temporal.  Moreover, his testimony implies that an outside group “installed” things or conducted behavioral conditioning.  So, if it can be learned, then it can be unlearned.  If someone can transform another person in society, can a person transform themselves?  The dialogue between McMurphey and the Chief reiterates how adversity is a way to cherish humanity’s ability of hope.  It is possible, according to McMurphey to transform oneself because he believes it to be true.  Without hope, even under conditions of extreme oppression, humans no longer would be.  Hope allows people to move on or like in the Hawaiian culture “Imua” move forward.  Hope allows a person to move forward regardless of the situation.  Hope keeps a person alive.
          Girl, Interrupted is interesting in that it is a psycho-biographical self-analysis.  A highly intelligent woman confined within a medical institution, Kaysen, attempts to deal with the power dynamics of the institution she voluntarily has chosen to be confined in.  In the chapter entitled Checks in Girl, Interrupted the power dynamic of the McLean Hospital are oppressive.  “Five-minute checks.  Fifteen-minute checks.  Half-hour checks” (Kaysen 54).  These are the various intervals of time that nurses must insure the safety of their patients.  “Five-minute checks.  Not enough time to drink a cup of coffee, read three pages of a book, take a shower”  (Kayesen 54)  Also, the consistent checking is the institutions way of maintaining its power relations.  If there were no individuals that required medical attention, then medical professionals would not have a job.  Perhaps the struggle between patients and medical professionals is the process of diagnosing a patient, categorizing them, creating a treatment plan, and deciding to prescribe medication.  Some where on the road to recovery the medical institution is not really required, but merely a hindrance to wellness.
          Kaysen was able to recover and realize what she was going through and to deal with the adversity of being human.  People get depressed.  People attempt to commit suicide.  “Too much acetylcholine, not enough serotonin, and you’ve got depression” (Kaysen 137).  When a person becomes a threat to themselves they become institutionalized.  Although the McLean Hospital was helpful to a certain extent in treating Kaysen, Kaysen worked the system.  This is to say that, Kaysen was a highly intelligent woman that was able to release herself from the oppressive institution. Kaysen’s treatment to recovery was through writing and although the McLean medical professionals seemed to be a part of that, they were merely a sounding board for her.    She helped herself.  She knew that the medical community was not entirely correct with how patients are dealt with.  “That’s because the analysts are writing about a country they call Mind and the neuroscientists are reporting from a country they call Brain” (Kaysen 143).  In other words, not everyone in the medical community really knows how to absolutely treat someone.  At the same time, the medical community may not be entirely certain about what they are talking about.  Kaysen was perceptive enough to understand this and took her life into her own hands. 
          “Kaysen is always aware of the world outside of herself, even when her treatment of these materials undermines the authority of the outside” (Marlan 4).  It is important note this characteristic because being aware is indicative of a person that is considered normal.  People not considered normal are not entirely aware of what is going on internally and externally.  “The question is not ‘who’ is crazy, but who makes the decisions regarding another’s sanity, how is the decision made, and what might it mean to be insane?”  (Marlan 5).  The criterion for making classifications about sane and insane carry implications that may be counterproductive for the patient.  The professionals creating the definitions have a power because they are imbued with the authority to make decisions and to enforce them.  Kaysen, herself, was the key to her own recovery.
Girl, Interupted and One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest point out the flaws and frailties of medical institutions and their practices.  McMurphey was attempting to jump from one institution to another, pretending to be insane to gain freedom, but realizing that in doing so one must adhere to the power relations of the institution; most of the time it involves relinquishing one’s freedom for the perception of it.   Kaysen goes through a self analysis of herself and the adversities of life realizing that the medical community, especially within the context of psychotherapy is not necessarily good.  As an intelligent author, Kaysen is able to change the dynamic of the medical institution.  Instead of them treating her, she treats herself.  She gives them the perception that they are a key factor in her recovery, but really uses them as a sounding board for her progress.  What really helps Kaysen is writing.  Her therapy was writing.  It was through writing where Kaysen goes through a self analysis, examining herself like a psychoanalyst would, and providing the course of action internally.



WORK SITED:
1.    Kaysen, Susanna.  Girl, Interrupted.  New York: Random House, 1993.
2.    Kesey, Ken.  One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest.  New York: Penguin Books, 2003.

3.    Marlan, Dawn.  “Reviews.”  Chicago Review 1996: p93, 10p.  Academic Search Premier.  EBSCOhost.  University of Hawaii at Manoa Library., Honolulu, HI.  12 Nov. 2005.  

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